Hi flow-tune,
If you check out the link below, it states that the "full red result" is a cmd-z problem.
Pixelation can have many reasons. I do not have that shader from Hello Luxx, so without anything to go on, I have no option but to suggest something.
I think the right place to ask would be hello luxx itself, I'm sure they like to know if something isn't working.
This link shows that they care:
https://helloluxx.com/products/assets/yma-toon-shader/
My best wishes